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Re: Alrite!!!
Also, this is, once again, not a story. Both this and Summer 08 would have been much better if posted in a blog, or in the community forums, rather than ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: 12 Shocks of Christmas, Pt. 1
“Who’s present is next, Teddy?” Mom asked, clasping her hands in her lap with a smile. Whose, not who's. My dad set down the movie he just received, the camera ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part One of Three)
Here's the revised version of He's Just Human , with a new title. Day One The room is silent, the air so tense I nearly choke. My father paces the ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Summer 08
What on earth? And I'd like to say more than the rules confine me to, believe me. A lot of pretty words one doesn't find in children's books. Anyway... This ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Her Eyes
You need to review four things to keep with the 2:1 review:piece of work ratio, and then continue to review 2 or more things for every piece of literature you ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Emo love <3
Whooooooa. First of all, shelley, didn't you read the rules? You need to review two things before you post something. So, go do that now. Also, XxXSerenityStillXxX, you've done 2 ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Un titled story.
Sorry, but as clearly stated in the rules which you probably should have read, you need to do at least two critiques before posting a story, and then maintain this ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Acrostic Thingie
...does no one get this? Yeah, leparapluie, "STOP HAMM MMER TIME" would really work. :wink: 1: Same as Cade said. You need to review something twice. Trust me, it gets ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Peter and the Starcatchers (plus sequels)
Haha, it isn't just because you're a book addict. Those books rock, as does Dave Barry's column. Ridley Pearson is good too, there was that *shudder* Disney book he did... ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: One Good that came from Crime
Tempted as I am to chew out the n00b first, I'll review beforehand. :P This was good. I thought the rhythm was a bit off, but I really liked the ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: The Night
omg ayra + monki why r u so mean? those are bad reviews and they will hurt gothfirls feellings this is actualy an amazin poem guys why u so mean????????????????????????????????? ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 4) On Trial
here's chapter four Four On Trial The police caught the young man, after about an hour-long chase, and brought him into a small building that smelled like eggs. The man ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: Magitech;Tales of Vlora
Magitech The Tales of Vlora Chapter 1 Vlora Vlora raced down the chrome narrow Switchy switchy. Make it "narrow, chrome" and don't forget the comma! hallway, avoiding crows That's 'crowds', ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
Who's saying they didn't like it? :P Well, you, I guess... They're distinguished critters, they hardly ever don't comment on something. I do, usually, but I can't find much to ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Ch 1
"Last time he meet" should be "The last time he met" "I sorry, Wolf" should be "I'm sorry, Wolf" “I’m sorry to hear that. But can’t you call me Lethero." ...
Jan 8, 2008
