Aet Lindling

You were the one who cheered me up when I was down. But now I have no one. You were my everything. I thought you loved me. That's a bit ...

Today we had no company. We were alone , because we had to leave for my other grandparents’ house on the twenty-ninth. The pair of turtle doves sat on my ...

On Christmas evening, we took our gifts upstairs to our rooms. I threw them all on the desk, but I put the glass figurine on a high shelf with my ...

Isaac stared up. He had been standing on the deck since dusk, counting the hours as the moon paced across the sky until it vanished into a thicket of clouds. ...

The first thing I noticed was that the description is too heavy, with too many substituted words and fancy descriptions that make it sound like Eragon. That's not a compliment, ...

Also, this is, once again, not a story. Both this and Summer 08 would have been much better if posted in a blog, or in the community forums, rather than ...

“Who’s present is next, Teddy?” Mom asked, clasping her hands in her lap with a smile. Whose, not who's. My dad set down the movie he just received, the camera ...

Here's the revised version of He's Just Human , with a new title. Day One The room is silent, the air so tense I nearly choke. My father paces the ...

What on earth? And I'd like to say more than the rules confine me to, believe me. A lot of pretty words one doesn't find in children's books. Anyway... This ...

You need to review four things to keep with the 2:1 review:piece of work ratio, and then continue to review 2 or more things for every piece of literature you ...

Whooooooa. First of all, shelley, didn't you read the rules? You need to review two things before you post something. So, go do that now. Also, XxXSerenityStillXxX, you've done 2 ...

Sorry, but as clearly stated in the rules which you probably should have read, you need to do at least two critiques before posting a story, and then maintain this ...

...does no one get this? Yeah, leparapluie, "STOP HAMM MMER TIME" would really work. :wink: 1: Same as Cade said. You need to review something twice. Trust me, it gets ...

Haha, it isn't just because you're a book addict. Those books rock, as does Dave Barry's column. Ridley Pearson is good too, there was that *shudder* Disney book he did... ...

Tempted as I am to chew out the n00b first, I'll review beforehand. :P This was good. I thought the rhythm was a bit off, but I really liked the ...